Wednesday, August 20, 2008




Riddles of Form – Twelve

Week Nine – Questions and Considerations


It dawned on me over the weekend that the presiding spirit over this whole ‘project’ has been Gilles Deleuze. And there’s a kind of logic at work – it was reading Anti-Oedipus and Thousand Plateaus in the mid-80s which played a large part in me abandoning a thesis. Twenty or so years on, I’m returning to ideas that had been shelved and finding ways that make them breathe.

Thinking aloud then ...

i. There is no Big Theory to impart. It’s really a matter of turning on to poetry – and finding you’re turned on by poetry. Ignition. Brake off. Drive. Go some place. Discover.

ii. Despite appearances, there is no Hidden Truth to be revealed. (I accept that the general development of my readings so far has had an Indiana Jones in the crypt feel. Bad habit.)

iii. What point is there in writing yet another student handbook, a key facts, a Cheat’s Guide to Poetry? Worse still, something that packages poetry as something cosy, ressuring, user-friendly. ‘John Ashbery for Beginners’. ‘L=A=N=G=U=A=G=E poetry for Dummies’. No.

iv. Poetry doesn’t make you a ‘better person’ (if that means all the class-based, moral-finger wagging, preening narcissism, Sensitive Soulism that accompanies such a phrase). But I do believe poetry has the capacity to transform your life.

v. Even while using the words ‘Poetry’ and ‘Poem’ I’ll admit to not knowing what it/they is/are. Perhaps that is a key dimension of the project: to discover what a poem could be?

vi. Blake (William, this time – but Quentin is good, too!) as another presiding spirit. The Holiness of the Imagination. And all that implies – and transforms.

vii. Reading the poem is itself a creative act. The ultimate reading of a poem is another poem. (Bloom). A basic premise of the project: sooner or later you start writing yourself. Writing informs the reading.

viii. Poem as constellation (Zukofsky). We receive the light that has been travelling but which will continue to travel making all the time new conjunctions. The implications of this for any ‘definitive’ reading.

ix. Likewise, the reader – the so-called ‘I’ – in a perpetual state of transformation. Reading changes you. (And yet the poem remains there on the page. A mystery).

x. The Eternal Return (Nietzsche) as a way of conceiving the creative act and a possible (im-possible?) way of living. The most difficult lesson?

xi. As a necessary consequence, the literature we most value has ENERGY. (Which is not to say it has to be violent, rabble-rousing, screaming. Think H.D.’s early poems. Emily Dickinson).

xii. To be ‘true’ to this writing seems – implicitly – to come into conflict with professional academic institutions and approaches. The English Department of the Soul (Spicer). How to resolve this? If this project is to be a book - how to conceive of a book which embodies its own ideas? Would anyone read it? Would anyone publish it? 

xiii. Poems are not written for examination purposes.

xiv. The fundamental poetry of the everyday. Of the everyday word. Of every word. (Nietzsche. Emerson. Duncan). The very move to language is a move towards metaphor.

xv. Haunted by all the old systems of thought. Ghosts, Sefiroth, angels, White Goddess, The Word, Logos.

xvi. If photography is to painting, then what is the ‘X’ to poetry? And that poetry has to struggle against?

xvii. The power of language to affect. Intensities. (Deleuze)

xviii. Poetry forces us to rethink Time and the Line (Derrida)

xix. Difficulty. The Opaque. The poem as a challenge – what we cannot predict, have not learned how to read, dis-locates. Reading then becomes. Reading as becoming.

xx. How to then transfer this to actual teaching practice?

xxi. How to break with ingrained attitudes of ‘elitism’, ‘cleverness’, ‘nerdy’, ‘weird’, ‘good grades’?

xxii. What is at work in the poem? What works in the poem? What can the poem do? Poem as machine (W.C. Williams).

All this. And more.

4 comments:

walrus said...

Hold on, Mr Carpenter. I'm not sure you're being fair to yourself or to Riddles. I think there is value in a book that introduces these new poets to a new generation of students and turns them on to poetry. What if Hugh Kenner had said, 'Actually, what's the point of writing about Pound?' Books that introduce new or challenging poets come to shape the reception of those poets and their destiny. Riddles is certainly not a cheat's guide or for Dummies -- not that kind of book at all, precisely because you've so scrupulously avoided the predictable academic approach. I think its greatest contribution would be to open some young minds to another way of approaching modern poetry. There's a great passage in Cinema 1 which I regard as Deleuze's creed, whether or not he meant us to read it in such a light.

"The only response consists in providing givens again, re-stocking the world with givens, putting something into circulation, as much as possible, however little it may be in such a way that through theses new or renewed givens, questions which are less cruel arise and are disseminated, questions which are more joyful, closer to nature and to life."


So why not re-stock the world with this particular given?

Admittedly, once you've come to that decision, the next hurdle is trickier: finding a publisher.

Be of good cheer,
Walrus

belgianwaffle said...

Hello again

Thanks for the encouragement - and that's a super quote from GD. (I also unearthed one about love meaning the creation of possible worlds - another one that explodes).

(iii) is really a self-warning: don't be tempted to go in that direction (rather than an 'oh sod it - why bother?')

As you'll have gathered I'm having a real Deleuze attack: Aphrohead books are raking it in! Those two Cinema texts are on order and 'Desert Islands' was waiting for me at school this morning. As well as the Varela 'Tree of Knowledge' (it must have arrived way back in early July). Funnily enough, my wife went to a conference on autopoeisis and has a colleague who lives nearby who's meant to be a leading Belgian authority on his work. Small worlds etc.

As I suggest in the post, Deleuze is such an obvious 'influence' - how could I have been so slow to make the connection (some kind of repression)? And that's why I'm questioning the form of 'Riddles of Form' - thinking in terms of D&G's way of structuring '1000 P's' etc and thinking of Derrida's questioning of the 'book'. And, taking it further, challenging the typical model of the conventional 'How To Read Poetry' text. Maybe produce something that isn't designed to elucidate but to set off further explosions? Something that sends readers off to become dancers or painters or trawler fishermen? Or am I just getting carried away with deterritorializations & lines of flight?

I'm also thinking that this Blog is - as such - an embodiment of a rhizomatics. I doubt any of this would have developed had you not entered the 'territory'. That I've had some comments from Michael Lally & Mark Truscott adds another set of connections. Now and again I think Robert Adamson is dropping by and who knows who else as a result of Ron Silliman's links? Maybe 'Riddles of Form' ought to incorporate its own becoming?

Anyway, rest assured I'm still feeling pretty positive about the idea and - given this is the last week of the summer holiday - reasonably pleased with what's resulted. (Astonishingly, I did actually produce something tangible). I am, though, acutely aware of what I haven't done in terms of the sonnets & other stuff. However, I would like to believe I have a clearer idea of how to develop this other writing and how to use pockets of time effectively as they arise during the term. Strategies, strategies ...

The Mediatheque has the Deleuze DVDs - eight hours or so - but I'm not sure my French is good enough. We'll see.

How to explain the fascination of Deleuze's work? Maybe it's his way of cutting through layers of thinking that have been sedimented by habit and laziness? Or that jump across areas of knowledge? Or the constant insistence on transforming life, here and now?

What was that formula in 'Bacon': pessimism of the intellect but optimism of the nervous system?

New rhizomes on the horizon!

Cheers

the C.

P.S. I've also dug out my Messiaen CDs - enjoying them more than ever.

walrus said...

1. I’m enjoying your Deleuze attack (tho it sounds painful). I have that DVD he made -- L'Abécédaire de Gilles Deleuze -- & it’s great to see his good humour, yet also his lively intelligence working away. He is charmed throughout (as am I, I must confess) by his interviewer, the lovely Claire Parnet, who is glimpsed in a mirror from time to time. My French ain’t wunderbar neither, but I found this

http://www.langlab.wayne.edu/
CStivale/D-G/ABC1.html

a great help to get through it all, which one can do in small chunks with a certain amount of application. But you should look at it if only for the shots of his smoke-fuelled lectures & to just get a sense of how genial yet weird yet intelligent yet approachable he was.

Be warned that Difference and Repetition is hard-going, but really worth the application – esp if you’re interested in Deleuze’s take on eternal recurrence – the repetition of that which differs. I was looking through it yesterday finding inspiration all over the place. I made a note of some things to share with you:

“To every perspective or point of view there must correspond an autonomous work with its own self-sufficient sense: what matters is the divergence of series, the decentring of circles, ‘monstrosity’.” [p.69]

“...make the work a process of learning or experimentation, but also something total every time, where the whole of chance is affirmed in each case...” [199]

I marked other passages, but looking at them now I want to type whole pages & that’s not easy using the hunt-and-peck method! I really should learn to touch-type. It would help so much...

(btw, The Fold has consistently baffled me, too.)

2. Yes, Riddles is a great achievement. I wonder how many words it runs to?

3. Perhaps your wife can explain autopoeisis to us all one day!

4. A recent musical joy: For the First Time by the Count Basie Trio. Heard “Blues in the Church” on Jazz Record Requests & just had to have it.

5. For obscure reasons I’ve been reading Philip Larkin’s All What Jazz (1970). His hatred of Miles Davis is funny, though he actually liked Miles Ahead: “The placing of the sad plangency of Davis’s flugelhorn against a shifting background of scored brass, French horns and woodwind produce a much pleasanter surface texture than usual with this soloist”, -- though he adds that Gil Evans “is the presiding genius”.

A more representative Larkin comment on Miles is: “I freely confess that there have been times recently when almost anything – the shape of a patch on the ceiling, a recipe for rhubarb jam read upside down in the paper – has seemed to me more interesting than the passionless creep of a Miles Davis trumpet solo.”

Ah well, you can’t please everyone all of the time...

Walrus

belgianwaffle said...

you'll have gathered that I am reading yr Comments in reverse order.

I'm not so sure about the Deleuze humour - maybe he warms up in the second act? As for Claire P. - hmmm ... I know - but I suspect very high maintenance. And the cost in cigs! I'll go for Anna Karina.

As for Larkin - don't you think it was all a bit of an Anglo Saxon pose: Kingsley Amis did it, Martin, too, (and Chris Hitchens)? Anything FOREIGN.*

To give Larkin his due, he did come up with a very good teacher joke. ie:

PL (at dinner party): All teachers are lazy sods.

Outraged Lady at Dinner Table: I'll have you know my husband is a teacher.

PL: (acidly) Well, you'll know what I mean then.

(or words to that effect)

___

*Martin A's famous definition of a poet: someone who doesn't drive.

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